|
101 | 101 | "before": "I felt painfully conspicuous", |
102 | 102 | "after": "I felt painfully conspicuous." |
103 | 103 | }, |
| 104 | + { |
| 105 | + "before": "Justin Beiber", |
| 106 | + "after": "Justin Bieber" |
| 107 | + }, |
104 | 108 | { |
105 | 109 | "before": "Lisa said. “Entire", |
106 | 110 | "after": "Lisa said, “entire" |
|
861 | 865 | } |
862 | 866 | ], |
863 | 867 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/03/08/interlude-7%C2%BD-bonus/": [ |
| 868 | + { |
| 869 | + "before": "she been blossoming", |
| 870 | + "after": "she had been blossoming" |
| 871 | + }, |
864 | 872 | { |
865 | 873 | "before": "Get Ready!", |
866 | 874 | "after": "Get ready!" |
|
1808 | 1816 | "before": "Charlotte,” I frowned. “Look", |
1809 | 1817 | "after": "Charlotte,” I frowned, “look" |
1810 | 1818 | }, |
| 1819 | + { |
| 1820 | + "before": "non-sequitor", |
| 1821 | + "after": "non-sequitur" |
| 1822 | + }, |
1811 | 1823 | { |
1812 | 1824 | "before": "Did they… was he", |
1813 | 1825 | "after": "Did they… Was he" |
|
2177 | 2189 | { |
2178 | 2190 | "before": "Grue,” Trickster said. “Get", |
2179 | 2191 | "after": "Grue,” Trickster said, “get" |
| 2192 | + }, |
| 2193 | + { |
| 2194 | + "before": "Nothing she can’t do outside the bubble", |
| 2195 | + "after": "Nothing she can do outside the bubble", |
| 2196 | + "_comment": "This doesn't make sense logically with 'can’t'." |
2180 | 2197 | } |
2181 | 2198 | ], |
2182 | 2199 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/08/18/snare-13-7/": [ |
|
2308 | 2325 | } |
2309 | 2326 | ], |
2310 | 2327 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/10/20/colony-15-2/": [ |
| 2328 | + { |
| 2329 | + "before": "turned something", |
| 2330 | + "after": "taken something", |
| 2331 | + "_comment": "'turned' is repeated later in the sentence." |
| 2332 | + }, |
2311 | 2333 | { |
2312 | 2334 | "before": "on,” Tattletale said. “Let’s", |
2313 | 2335 | "after": "on,” Tattletale said, “let’s" |
|
2318 | 2340 | } |
2319 | 2341 | ], |
2320 | 2342 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/10/23/colony-15-3/": [ |
| 2343 | + { |
| 2344 | + "before": "whether or not I agreed or not", |
| 2345 | + "after": "whether I agreed or not", |
| 2346 | + "_comment": "Alternatively, the second 'or not' could be deleted instead of the first." |
| 2347 | + }, |
2321 | 2348 | { |
2322 | 2349 | "before": "Woah,” Regent said. “Relax", |
2323 | 2350 | "after": "Woah,” Regent said, “relax" |
|
2329 | 2356 | { |
2330 | 2357 | "before": "the street</p>", |
2331 | 2358 | "after": "the street.</p>" |
| 2359 | + }, |
| 2360 | + { |
| 2361 | + "before": "dishonest members", |
| 2362 | + "after": "dishonest member", |
| 2363 | + "_comment": "He's talking only about Skitter here." |
2332 | 2364 | } |
2333 | 2365 | ], |
2334 | 2366 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/10/27/colony-15-4/": [ |
|
2485 | 2517 | { |
2486 | 2518 | "before": "decisions: Holding back", |
2487 | 2519 | "after": "decisions: holding back" |
| 2520 | + }, |
| 2521 | + { |
| 2522 | + "before": "their positioning, they had planned this", |
| 2523 | + "after": "their positioning… They had planned this", |
| 2524 | + "_comment": "A comma seems like the wrong choice here." |
2488 | 2525 | } |
2489 | 2526 | ], |
2490 | 2527 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/12/22/monarch-16-9/": [ |
|
2593 | 2630 | { |
2594 | 2631 | "before": "GWER-.</p>", |
2595 | 2632 | "after": "GWER—.</p>" |
| 2633 | + }, |
| 2634 | + { |
| 2635 | + "before": "the Birdcage", |
| 2636 | + "after": "the birdcage", |
| 2637 | + "_comment": "A literal birdcage, not the parahuman prison." |
2596 | 2638 | } |
2597 | 2639 | ], |
2598 | 2640 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/01/12/migration-17-5/": [ |
|
2758 | 2800 | } |
2759 | 2801 | ], |
2760 | 2802 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/02/05/monarch-18-6/": [ |
| 2803 | + { |
| 2804 | + "before": "he encouragement", |
| 2805 | + "after": "the encouragement" |
| 2806 | + }, |
2761 | 2807 | { |
2762 | 2808 | "before": "‘okay’", |
2763 | 2809 | "after": "‘OK’", |
|
3032 | 3078 | } |
3033 | 3079 | ], |
3034 | 3080 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/23/chrysalis-20-2/": [ |
| 3081 | + { |
| 3082 | + "before": "something together something", |
| 3083 | + "after": "something together" |
| 3084 | + }, |
3035 | 3085 | { |
3036 | 3086 | "before": "of anxiety</em>.", |
3037 | 3087 | "after": "of anxiety.</em>" |
|
3305 | 3355 | } |
3306 | 3356 | ], |
3307 | 3357 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/05/21/interlude-22-donation-bonus-1/": [ |
| 3358 | + { |
| 3359 | + "before": "Sumimasen deshita", |
| 3360 | + "after": "<i lang=\"ja-JP\">Sumimasen deshita</i>" |
| 3361 | + }, |
3308 | 3362 | { |
3309 | 3363 | "before": "“is it reassuring", |
3310 | 3364 | "after": "“Is it reassuring" |
|
3337 | 3391 | "before": "of the ship. It’s", |
3338 | 3392 | "after": "of the ship.’ It’s" |
3339 | 3393 | }, |
| 3394 | + { |
| 3395 | + "before": "supervillain-turned hero", |
| 3396 | + "after": "supervillain-turned-hero" |
| 3397 | + }, |
3340 | 3398 | { |
3341 | 3399 | "before": "Las Vegas Rogue", |
3342 | 3400 | "after": "Las Vegas rogue" |
|
3359 | 3417 | } |
3360 | 3418 | ], |
3361 | 3419 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/05/30/drone-23-3/": [ |
| 3420 | + { |
| 3421 | + "before": "nerf", |
| 3422 | + "after": "Nerf" |
| 3423 | + }, |
3362 | 3424 | { |
3363 | 3425 | "before": "Nine,” Glenn said. “I", |
3364 | 3426 | "after": "Nine,” Glenn said, “I" |
|
3370 | 3432 | } |
3371 | 3433 | ], |
3372 | 3434 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/01/drone-23-4/": [ |
| 3435 | + { |
| 3436 | + "before": "FIrst", |
| 3437 | + "after": "First" |
| 3438 | + }, |
3373 | 3439 | { |
3374 | 3440 | "before": "said. Someone", |
3375 | 3441 | "after": "said. “Someone" |
|
3386 | 3452 | } |
3387 | 3453 | ], |
3388 | 3454 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/06/interlude-23/": [ |
| 3455 | + { |
| 3456 | + "before": "one—or two-word", |
| 3457 | + "after": "one- or two-word" |
| 3458 | + }, |
3389 | 3459 | { |
3390 | 3460 | "before": "her mouth: A click", |
3391 | 3461 | "after": "her mouth: a click" |
|
3485 | 3555 | } |
3486 | 3556 | ], |
3487 | 3557 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/07/02/scarab-25-2/": [ |
| 3558 | + { |
| 3559 | + "before": "Enough or three", |
| 3560 | + "after": "Enough for three" |
| 3561 | + }, |
| 3562 | + { |
| 3563 | + "before": "—3", |
| 3564 | + "after": "-3", |
| 3565 | + "_comment": "This is a computer display and thus probably uses a regular hyphen for the minus sign." |
| 3566 | + }, |
3488 | 3567 | { |
3489 | 3568 | "before": "said. Except without", |
3490 | 3569 | "after": "said. “Except without" |
|
3560 | 3639 | { |
3561 | 3640 | "before": "<span style=\"text-decoration:underline;\"><strong>Lord</strong></span><span style=\"text-decoration:underline;\"> <strong>Walston</strong></span>", |
3562 | 3641 | "after": "<span style=\"text-decoration:underline;\"><strong>Lord Walston</strong></span>" |
| 3642 | + }, |
| 3643 | + { |
| 3644 | + "before": "—16", |
| 3645 | + "after": "-16", |
| 3646 | + "_comment": "This is a computer display and thus probably uses a regular hyphen for the minus sign." |
3563 | 3647 | } |
3564 | 3648 | ], |
3565 | 3649 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/07/18/sting-26-1/": [ |
|
3577 | 3661 | } |
3578 | 3662 | ], |
3579 | 3663 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/07/20/sting-26-2/": [ |
| 3664 | + { |
| 3665 | + "before": "It didn’t hurt that", |
| 3666 | + "after": "It didn’t help that", |
| 3667 | + "_comment": "This makes more sense with 'help'" |
| 3668 | + }, |
3580 | 3669 | { |
3581 | 3670 | "before": "And gauntlet</em>, to reply to the last one", |
3582 | 3671 | "after": "And gauntlet, to reply to the last one</em>" |
|
3788 | 3877 | } |
3789 | 3878 | ], |
3790 | 3879 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/08/31/cockroaches-28-1/": [ |
| 3880 | + { |
| 3881 | + "before": "“No, I said.", |
| 3882 | + "after": "“No,” I said." |
| 3883 | + }, |
3791 | 3884 | { |
3792 | 3885 | "before": "could save issue", |
3793 | 3886 | "after": "could say issue" |
|
3856 | 3949 | "before": "I’m <em>not? Fuck</em>. There’s", |
3857 | 3950 | "after": "I’m <em>not</em>? <em>Fuck.</em> There’s" |
3858 | 3951 | }, |
| 3952 | + { |
| 3953 | + "before": "‘I <em>don’t know</em>,”", |
| 3954 | + "after": "“I <em>don’t know</em>,”" |
| 3955 | + }, |
3859 | 3956 | { |
3860 | 3957 | "before": "I suspect It’s a", |
3861 | 3958 | "after": "I suspect it’s a" |
|
4382 | 4479 | }, |
4383 | 4480 | { |
4384 | 4481 | "before": "that ‘because I can’t isn’t an", |
4385 | | - "after": "that ‘because I can’t’ isn’t an" |
| 4482 | + "after": "that ‘because I can’ isn’t an" |
4386 | 4483 | } |
4387 | 4484 | ], |
4388 | 4485 | "https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/11/19/interlude-end/": [ |
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